Sweeney stared out the window of his parlor. The mist outside turning into a thick fog. A razor was clutched in his hand, his thumb stroking the sharp blade. With a sigh, he turned away from the window and over the door. It didn't move. He hadn't had a customer for days. Maybe they had become suspecious of him. If no more people were to come to his parlor, not only would Mrs. Lovett go out of buisness, but he wouldn't be able to get his revenge.
Then he heard the soft chime of the door opening.
A skinny man walked in with a desperate need of a shave. The man looked rich. A tall top hat was placed on his head, a thick, black tuxedo covered him. Shiny black boots were on his feet and he held a glosy, wooden cane in his hands.
"Hello, sir. You here for a shave?" Sweeney greeted the man, a soft edge to his voice, trying to comfort the man.
With a grunt, the man nodded once. "Yes, and make it snappy. I'm 'pose to be at a meetin' soon!"
"Of course, sir. Take a seat. Please." Sweeney smiled, his eyes squinting, making his smile look more of a smirk. "I'll be quick. I'll make you look rather dashing." He walked over to the man, taking off his jacket and hat, placing them on the coat rack by the door.
The man grunted again, striding over to the chair. He sat down and shifted in it till he got in a comfortable position.
Sweeney slowly walked over to the table behind the shair, mixing lather in a smooth, spinning stir. His eyes jolted over to the shair, then to the hair on the back of the man's head. "So, sir, you have a family?" He began a conversation.
The man turned his head around to look at Sweeney. He raised a brow. "Yeah, a wife and two boys."
Sweeney smiled lightly, walking over with the lather in his hand. He stirred it a bit more, then took the brush and stroked it across his chin. "Ah, yes. Families are nice, ain't they? I've never been able to experience a sort like that for awhile." He finished placing the lather on his face.
Nodding, the man closed his eyes, laying back his head.
Sweeney walekd back to the counter, grabbing a clean apron and his razor. He placed the apron over the man and tied it around his shoulders. Flipping open his razor, he held it up in the air, examining it closely, starring at the shine gliding across the silver. Looking back at the man, he got close to his face, sliding the razar down his cheek, leaving behind a trail of smooth skin. He continued with repeatively. Then, he spoke up. "You're going to miss your meeting."
The man opened his eyes, shocked. "W-what?"
"Don't worry. You won't be late for any more." Sweeney smirked, swiftly draggin his razor across his throat.
The man gagged, choaking on his blood, spilling violently out his throat. He clenched his neck. Some blood squirting onto Sweeney's sleeve, making the creamish white color turn dark red. The man soon died after.
Sweeney looked at his blood stained sleeve, then over at his dripping razor. He turned to the window, stepping on the pedal next to the chair, causing the chair to fall backwards and the man slipping down the trap door for Mrs. Lovett's needs. With a sigh, he grabbed a cloth from his belt and began to clean the blood from his razor.
A knock on the door echoed in the room.
"Open up!"
Sweeney flung around, facing the door. His eyes widened to see police outside. He slowly put his blood stained sleeve behind his back.
"I said 'Open up!'"
TO BE CONTINUED













Comments
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I'm not just a dork.....I'm a dork with a camera!
There will be more soon.
Oh so soon. >D
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Yeah, you better run, fool!
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I'm not just a dork.....I'm a dork with a camera!
BUSTED. 8D
I can't wait to see what happens!
and yeah, that's what happens with my fan fictions. I write out a billion pages but when it's eventually typed, it only takes up a little space. D:
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someone give me my shot or I'll rot here.
*runs to chapter 2*
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someone give me my shot or I'll rot here.
Omg. Computers are so hi-tech!
But. Um. Yes.
But Oh noezz D:
Not the police! *sprints to the next chapter*
(I was going to say run, but then it'd look like I copied. mumblemumble.)
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"Condemned to death one of the finest characters I ever came across. A man named Pearse. Must be something very wrong in the state of things, must there not, that makes a man like that a rebel?"
Amen, Blackadder!
Good fur you. 8)
Police.
Yes.
BUWHAHAHA!
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Yeah, you better run, fool!
Writing isn't one of my best skills.
-Tear-
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Yeah, you better run, fool!
I only see one plot problem. In the movie, Mrs. Lovett said they were careful to pick and choose strangers that wouldn't be missed. If someone's rich with a family, it's very likely he would be missed.
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I am the Black Mage! I casts the spells that makes the peoples fall down!
-----Black Mage; 8-bit Theater
You're about as manly as a Square Enix character. Shall I call you Captain Basch from Dalmasca?
-----Yami Bakura; YGOA
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